Fascinating journey through my mind

Thursday, March 01, 2007

For you I should

Forever I can.
For you I should.
In this eternal silence,
longing for you.
In the game,
guessing your next move.
In the love,
waiting for one moment.
Digging up and burying
those memories
you gave
and those
you took away.
Breaking up and moving closer.
Breaking down and denying it.
Being right next to you
and feeling far away.
Saying all that
you want to hear
and hiding all that
I want to say.
I can.
For you I would.
Will I?
:: posted by Venkat C, 3/01/2007 11:32:00 PM


And the poem fest continues :)... Good one, FJ...
//Being right next to you
and feeling far away//... Wow... I mean... Wow... :D ... very "Dil se"...
Blogger A penny for my thoughts?, at 3:10 AM, March 02, 2007  
I just love your break-up of the thoughts in bits. You are really an elegant phrase-breaker! Just an elegant break at the right point!

Let the blog world and its readers get flooded with your poems!
Blogger Blade bala, at 3:14 PM, March 02, 2007  
@ Nas
And vice versa is true too..//being far way and feeling right next to you// Thanks Nas..

@ Bala
Mostly I write for myself and friends like you.. I dont have any big plans :D
Blogger Venkat, at 3:58 PM, March 02, 2007  
throwed -> threw.. I need grammar classes..any volunteers?
Blogger FJ, at 4:09 PM, March 02, 2007  
And "venkat" account is mine too..I use it in exceptional moments when I feel too lazy to switch accounts
Blogger FJ, at 4:10 PM, March 02, 2007  
This poem actually emphasizes the uncertainity of future...I was actually thinking about the use of promises and then luckily read ur poem.
All those who make you and break you
May be I will may be I wont:)
Blogger astrocrazy2005, at 5:08 PM, March 02, 2007  
True.. I may or may not :) good to know that you were thinking in the same lines...Thanks astrocrazy.. keep coming
Blogger FJ, at 11:56 PM, March 02, 2007  
Love the way you write..so crisp, to the point, yet so elegant the way in which you put your thoughts to words..
Blogger Perspective Inc., at 7:46 PM, March 06, 2007  
Thanks Perspective, I love your posts too. There is a depth in all your posts.
Blogger FJ, at 9:57 PM, March 06, 2007  

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