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Tuesday, February 27, 2007


Guilt chases me
for empty promises I made
beautiful castles I built
sweet words I whispered
happy dreams I wove
moral values I held
tall virtues I symbolized
false compliments I showered
borrowed advice I delivered
divine hope I beckoned
heavenly future I promised
and because you believed.
:: posted by Venkat C, 2/27/2007 03:50:00 PM


u cheater ..:p
Blogger Prathiba, at 6:00 AM, February 28, 2007  
May be u r getting cheated by thinking I m a cheater :D
Blogger FJ, at 8:14 AM, February 28, 2007  
You are in your literary peak I guess! Amazing poem and I can just feel the depth of those words!
Long Live FJ!

But I will leave it as a poem, and won't believe it ;)
Blogger Blade bala, at 4:24 AM, March 01, 2007  
I think you have developed this ability to give your poems the real meaning with the last line you write. It feels falling through a well and ending up in wonderland!
Blogger Blade bala, at 4:25 AM, March 01, 2007  
Thanks Bala.. :).. I dont want to peak so soon... I love last lines :D
Blogger FJ, at 7:47 PM, March 01, 2007  
Were you a back bencher in school?
Blogger Blade bala, at 3:09 PM, March 02, 2007  
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Blogger Venkat, at 3:54 PM, March 02, 2007  
Ha ha.. was a back bencher in 3rd std..then they throwed me to the the war front (front bench) :D
Blogger Venkat, at 3:54 PM, March 02, 2007  

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