Fascinating journey through my mind

Friday, February 23, 2007

The fire of desire.

Lost all of them,
in a dream.
Up into the clouds,
it lifts me.
Then abruptly,
drops me.
Is getting hurt,
a pastime?
A sin,
committed by whom?
Optimism and hope,
are they sins?
Am I a sinner?
Yes, I am.
The fire of desire
will burn forever.
Engulfing me,
the sinner.
:: posted by Venkat C, 2/23/2007 01:23:00 PM


Wow! You have the gift of putting your thoughts into the most beautiful words... :)
//Optimism and hope, are they sins?// a question that gets oft repeated in my mind...
Blogger A penny for my thoughts?, at 8:23 AM, February 24, 2007  
Nas, Thank you. I am getting flattered :D Please be sure that whether they are sins or not, there is no life without them. They are the forces which keep us alive.
Blogger FJ, at 7:53 PM, February 25, 2007  
Are you a christian by any chance? Your style of writing reminds me of an ad for Toyota cars!
Blogger Blade bala, at 5:13 AM, February 27, 2007  
Which ad? I am not a christian :) I am an Atheist.
Blogger FJ, at 1:10 PM, February 27, 2007  
For lack of anything better to say... brilliant!!
Blogger Perspective Inc., at 2:37 PM, February 27, 2007  
Thank you.
Blogger FJ, at 9:54 PM, February 27, 2007  

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