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Wednesday, March 05, 2008

They don't

Staring back with all honesty,
being as real as life and death,
breaking all resolve,
inspiring a raw smile,
or a quick dance,
or a miniature facial circus,
being someone we avoid with all might
just to get back every day and night,
making us realize our true nature
and the inability to change it,
reminding the smallest of flaws,
judging every move,
killing all fear to live
and all courage to die,
Mirrors - both material and human,
don't lie.
:: posted by Venkat C, 3/05/2008 06:34:00 PM

4 Comments:

I think every time I read your poem you make me feel like watching a thriller movie - "an unexpected next move". So, I did like to confer the title "Digil Pulavar".

"a miniature facial circus"
Man oh man! That is an amazing line!!!

"killing all fear to live
and all courage to die,"
Can't write that truth in better words. Awesome, marvellous!!!
Blogger Blade bala, at 5:56 AM, March 06, 2008  
Hi Bala.
"Digil Pulavar" :D

Thanks a lot for your continued support and I feel great reading your comments. Keep coming!

- FJ
Blogger FJ, at 10:49 AM, March 06, 2008  
Visited your blog after a long time :-) Good one...am reading thro all the posts I missed.
Blogger Vivek, at 12:36 PM, March 07, 2008  
Thanks Vivek, keep coming!!
Blogger FJ, at 6:03 PM, March 07, 2008  

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