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Tuesday, October 21, 2008

A Child?

Backwards through reality
in the twisted sense
of time.
Flashes of brilliance
followed by awe
and sense of inevitable blankness.
Synchronized play of lights
in a bigger sequence
incomprehensible and illogical.
A sense of presence
in the events and people
and yet floating around
in a different dimension
away from all.
A dance on tiny feet,
random and innocent,
shy and untalented,
copied and wrong.
White light,
broken solutions,
a hint and they are gone.
:: posted by Venkat C, 10/21/2008 04:17:00 AM

2 Comments:

Excellent poem FJ!

I have been reading your poem for three days on the trot, but couldn't get your point on the last three lines! Or, atleast I couldn't get a meaning out of those three lines.

"A sense of presence
in the events and people
and yet floating around
in a different dimension
away from all."

This is brilliant and so true!
Blogger Blade bala, at 5:22 AM, October 24, 2008  
Brilliant!!
You know how to put the right amount of magic and awe in your words! You never over dose your readers.
Blogger Shehneela Farheen, at 9:15 PM, November 02, 2008  

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