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Friday, October 19, 2007

Melt in a second

Long after you are gone,
the smile lingers on.
A strange sense of blankness.
Light too bright to see.
Madness is not distant.
Uncontrollable smirk.
Mind can be the alternate universe
with its own big bangs
and black holes.
Gravity and causality disappear.
It was not you,
it was me.
You were a random occurrence
when I was looking for a coincidence.
Consequences and causes are mine.
In the infinite wisdom of chaos
a flake of snow floated
on to my outstretched hand
to melt in a second.
:: posted by Venkat C, 10/19/2007 09:43:00 AM


"You were a random occurrence
when I was looking for a coincidence"
Absolutely fantastic lines!
Blogger Blade bala, at 10:11 AM, October 20, 2007  
Hey man! You've come a long way in your poetry skills! Way to go! :-)
Anonymous Phoenix, at 11:53 AM, November 07, 2007  
Pheonix, Thank you! Coming from you, it is huge!

Bala, Thanks again man!
Blogger FJ, at 1:01 PM, January 06, 2008  

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